这是成绩单上ETS给予3分文章的评语:Displays some competence in analytical writing, although the writing is flawed in at least one of the following ways: limited analysis or development, weak organization, weak control of sentence structures and language usage, with errors that often result in vagueness or lack of clarity.
先来看看ETS官方评语针对低分作文语言方面缺陷的说明吧:weak control of sentence structures and language usage, with errors that often result in vagueness or lack of clarity. 由此可见低分作文一个很重要的flaw就是由于遣词造句能力不佳直接导致语言上的失误,评分人根本无法理解作者写作的本意,严重影响了文章语言表达的clarity.